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I recommend to you travel to Turkey, Russia and Japan. Turkey is very impressive place to tour. Istanbul, which is the biggest city in Turkey, was once the capital of Byzantine Empire and Ottoman Empire. You can find tons of and tons of! historical place like Hagia Sophia, Walls of Constantinople, Basilica Cistern(underground reservoir), because of its long history ). Hagia Sophia is a huge mosque and its design will make your eyes happy for its attractive and classical design. You can see many religion relic inside the mosque considering it was built in Byzantine Period. Walls of Constantinople is the long wall covering the side of Istanbul's district. Guess why that wall was called 'unbreakable wall'! The wall blocked invasion of Byzantine Empire for almost 1000 years.  And Basilica Cistern is the big underground reservoir under the Istanbul city. It was called 'sunken palace'. So there are full of many mysterious things. Now Let's go to Cappadocia, which is a strange stone town in Turkey.  Stay a day in the cave room and travel the underground city! And You can also ride a hot air balloon. There you'll see the beautiful landscape of Cappadocia which will cherish you forever. Sounds like a trip of Dream you have to enjoy someday!  Stay a day in the cave room and travel the underground city! And You can also ride a hot air balloon. There you'll see the beautiful landscape of Cappadocia which will cherish you forever. Sounds like a trip of Dream you have to enjoy someday! .The next, Second is Russia.  No need to mention that Russia is a GIANT country, no need to mention that you can experience numerous things for joy! . St, Petersburg is the classical and historical city in Russia.  So you may think you are walking in the modern Europe. Trans-Siberia Railway is the longest trans railway in the world. It takes about 1 week to finish the train tour. You will be able to meet new friend or have a time alone in the train. And you can experience many cultures like European, Asian, Native, other people. Last is Japan, Japan has many climate and culture. Tokyo is the capital of Japan. So there are many place like museum, concert hall, Tokyo tower, historical place. If you like animation, you can enjoy the tour of Tokyo. Sapporo is the beautiful city with snow. Sapporo snow festival is the most famous snow festival in the world. Okinawa is located out of the mainland of Japan. So you can spend time in the a tropical island. You can do swim,aquarium. It is called Hawaii of the East Asia. I hope my essay help you. Thank you for reading. 

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